tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26401815.post3038832041816883421..comments2023-08-13T04:25:27.199-06:00Comments on Spoiled for the Ordinary: Writing Dissection - Part TwoJasonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18363518142334125056noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-26401815.post-76380864409314327442007-02-26T14:55:00.000-07:002007-02-26T14:55:00.000-07:00Jason, I really like what you did here. I thought ...Jason, I really like what you did here. I thought that passage was a little heavy with description until you nailed the fact that it is a pivotal event. I think your final point was excellent.<BR/><BR/>I'll look forward to your comments on the second passage.<BR/><BR/>BeckyRebecca LuElla Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06823550402103559922noreply@blogger.com